A few months ago at Tusmore Park:
"You're invited. Please come."
A little more direct than most, so a gold star there.
But that 'please' makes it seem almost as though you are pleading with me... Are you that desperate? And if you're pleading with the general public like that, it can't be that good, can it?
And such a general invitation seems to, well, cheapen it somewhat.
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